this poem is inspired by this 2006 poem “risen”.

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i laugh fr fr

I was ready to give up
Until I felt a sudden caress on my hand
you looked at me with desire, and I blushed
and our passion was awakened
from a year-long deep sleep
Is this a short-lived daydream?
or the impossibility of our new reality?

One thought on “poetry: a sudden caress

  1. That Bukowski quote, like many of his ooze with toughness. If it were me writing it, I’d say the predictable….”and I cry.” Now, your poem is a beautiful reminder of the power of a hand caress or holding hands. It’s an instant heaven. God, I miss holding hands.

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